A Season Once In Eden! ! Comments

I think today’s clothing designers look back to Eden, …..happy the tree with fruit was there! You mean animal skins? Like Opossums’ and wombats’ skins. Poor animals! I hope Eve made the flesh into nice meals. bri ;) into Section C of October showcase.

Yes well written, just remember that even a God has a name. A Little more research is needed. and it too can be revealed. Nice poem with truth as its theme. Read mine - If There Be No God - Adeline

'One is wise, His name is God When you are sad He will be your Dad' - Well said! Nice poem.

The fall of man in the garden of Eden. The serpent beguiled me it was said. Words of evil was put in my head. A true story with an unhappy ending. Well written and well done!

line 9: 'It shouldn't have happened, yet it did', i like that.but this poem should have happened and im glad it did. very good points, creative.if only we could go back in time...