A Season For Bats - This Poem Is Dedicated For My Daughter Da Comments

This is very good poem. Very good work. Interesting and amazing.DA

I felt this was Interesting A story well told

absolutely wonderful penned, , came within a warm feelings from a pure loving heart to whom a writer care about.. great my dear great poet.. hazem al..

It may just be the use of the English language, but the writing of this is hard to read. It seems to go in starts and stops within sentences. There are places where the words fit together and places where they don't. This hurts the effect of the very descriptive language. This is a fair piece overall. GW62

Wonderful imagery filled with strong vibes

You painted it well in my mind. Nice one.

Hey this was a Good read But this is a poem you need your poems to flow more........

strange and beautiful...liked it...and thank you for your nice comments

Different Dark Beautiful imagery and though provoking A very good one

This real abominable bats and the repulsive bats of difficulties tries to stick to us forever...........but as one repels the bats one should reples the difficulties and not allow them to stick to our soul............Good Write..........

A strange phsycological poem nicely written and metaphorically expressed, fear still prevails even its dawn and the street is empty. Wonderful imagery too. A meaningful write indeed. Regards Naseer

Wonderful penned lines filled with stunning imagery. Nice lines my friend