Monday, November 17, 2008

! ...A Season Between Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the outgrowth
Of tender leaves of the fully
Blossomed ketaki tree,
She clasps the grass blades
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Seema Aarella
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Sarwar Chowdhury 26 November 2008

WoW! what a poem! ! Astonishing images painted! superb! ! ! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2008

a touching write...over flowing emotions...well wrtten piece...10

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Indira Babbellapati 20 November 2008

seema, very evocative...! ! !

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 November 2008

I read and reread. so much apt vocabulary. passion runs like water in the Nile and words fall from Nayakara. every reader will like to be the addressee. you are a jewel in every poem of you.

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 17 November 2008

Enigmatic tussle of love! Played out in a park where couples sense each other, before, few of lucky, who get true love. Beautiful imagery with a hint of season.

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

KGF, India
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