A Seaside Picture Comments

A amazing poem. The sea, a place to create memories.

A amazing poem. The sea, a adventure and so beautiful.

A common seaside picture is made to a good poetry.

really nice poem can you tell what castle made is that you sorrow

Slow down; edit critically; correct all grammatical gaffes. drb

the same as the house weak, because built from the cards the dog is running it is leaving only tracks but it are transitory what sweet melodic floe of poem is...thoughtful, meaningful and heart touhing one..wonderful..and really very impressive one..liekd it 10/10

a very nice poem.meaningful.last para is very good voted10 surya

you are a wise person.......... good poetry.

Very well written, insteresting poem. The last strophe is an excellent conclusuion. The realisation have the idea and the attempt very well. A knowledge of psychology and an ability are useful and observation too. Very much I like this poem. He isn't 'groaning' and a lot is telling the man, what is happening in the real life.Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt