A Seasick Saga Comments

Humour in rhyme. We shall get along like a house on fire.

I like this one Joe. It's so funny. I had to look up the word 'shad' though, I'd never come across it before. In verse 5, line 2 you have made a typing error. Just thought I'd let you know.

The herculean task to set your boat in shape and later the adventurous ride over the swelling waters must have been so exciting! But with a rumbling stomach, all excitement vanishes! What a mishap! ! ! An enjoyable ride back to your younger days of adventure! !

Very good one Joseph; I get seasick just looking at pictures of the ocean! ! ! So I really like this one.

Semi literate? ? ? you are not...this is a nice poem i mean very nice poem...NO one can consider him/herself as semi literate, your eyes are wide open to witness this beautiful write...lesson and things really nice here, i like it Joseph :) _Unwritten Soul

Wonderful lesson, thank you for share! I think it was worth every bit of work, how would I love to count the smiles it brought!

Aye! A house, A ship, A nauseous stomach! Rum!

I like your poems. Congratulation. I love this one because ' When I'm afloat my nerves are calm ' Thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra

Oh, what fun, a lovely poem, sorry you finished up with your stomach elsewhere though, I think I would have done as well.

Oh, I hate boats, or at least being on one in dodgy weather. Good one, very amusing.