Sunday, July 19, 2015

A Seascape Dream At Dawn Comments

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In that sloth before waking up a dream may come
And vanish without trace, unless its vividness
Is noted on a scrap of paper or saved in cyber-space.
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Ananta Madhavan
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Roseann Shawiak 28 July 2015

Love the first stanza, I also wake up and write it down, using a flashlight to see with! Love this line: Symbols of transience in boundless Eternity. Beautiful dream-like quality with gentle rhythms singing in the background. Great poem, Ananta! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 July 2015

Truly, dreams acknowledge life it's mirth and woe.Loved reading the poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 July 2015

Vanish without trace! With the muse of a dream. Nice work.

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