A Search For Death Comments

I've heard that story before, but not presented in a way so beautiful and touching in a way that the message sinks in. Nicely written.

a moral lesson told in a beautiful way. indeed death will visit at the appointed time for sure. voted10 surya

how ironic. very funny too! hahahha i cant stop laughing at their foolish greed and how they found death. a perfect 10 with no objections.

this is very good. i like it

Nice Poem. The school goers should read this piece because it has an important lesson.

Fabulous nice piece, love it.

Very interestingly put. A fable-like poem with a moral: greed never pays.

I am impressed. Well-chosen words coupled with a profound meaning...such a good write indeed!

beautiful theme... very beautifully presented lines nowhere stiking up... pure flow of good poetic language. good write, hamid

very good well written loved it xoxo loves clarissa

Sin a destraction that can be easly left alone, but those three men prove the point that it isn't as easy as it looks. :) Although it indeed in death, I do truly think that ways a happy ending,3 less evils in the world. Good write.

this poem is like oh so wow factor! ! well done peace ox. ♥ kaila

Good story line, greed and averice are the stumbling blocks of the world to-day keep on writting but watch out for those typo's they brek up the flow gave it nine Chris

Nice storyline, good philosophy, delievered in a not very contemporary poetry format.Could however make a good children's poem if rythms, rymes and correct spellings are inserted appropriately. Nice attempt though. Keep trying.

This is the end of greed. Very nice story.