Saturday, October 29, 2011

A Search Comments

Rating: 4.5

The stars are sailing their ship
in the galaxy of open universal route
up above the sky
with a twinkling search light
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ramesh rai
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Ravi Sathasivam 20 October 2013

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 26 September 2013

A fine poem with good thread of thought.

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Heather Wilkins 18 August 2013

excellent write good images enjoyed the read

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 August 2013

Inspiring poem..Loved reading each lines and even the flow is very beautiful.

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Adeline Foster 02 August 2013

Very good and with some exceptional metaphors. It is true: it lingers in one's mind. Read mine - Wide Open Spaces. Adeline

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Linda L. Franklin 24 November 2011

I have run some of your poetry, very good. Keep up the wonderful work you are doing, Poetry comes from the heart and that is a great thing. Good luck with your poetry. Sincerely, Linda Franklin

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hdhd dudjf 11 November 2011

very inspiring..the poem leaves its taste lingering in the reader's mind for a long time..

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