A Seamless Life Line Comments

So much truth in so little words. Really like this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Lovely poem..Good message...Great write..

Great poem with great moral lesson about life

words fall into line as you write from your soul..blessings

Path of life, a line that never ends, events that succeed following a pattern, penned so lovely by you..Cristina Teodor

Another very good one Dave; great pondering upon life's tracks...and destination. Well done.

Sometimes i wonder if you are a patriot, coz when you write, make all heart out... I agree many of them finished the life lines with a dot. end of a story end of a life line...but it never stop to have another dot like this................... how many dots will they have for their life? when love is not linked to our hearts and war/hate is connected to our souls it seems like a life line will contiguously to be done...what a sad one_Unwritten SOul

very true...life is events one following another

How did we get to 'now'. Sometimes it feels impossible that life has passed us by so effortlessly. Well written and illuminating. Thank you for your kind comment on one of my poems.

love poem, i like this, like it is planned.

Absolutely true, great words.

Great poem.

destiny, or fate... the path we follow! great poem!

Great little verse, and so true.

Mmmh! you could never be more correct than this beautiful poem.... A never ending story Of events. That fall into line like soldiers on a parade..... Salute to you there big brother.