You are...
A sea with storms
But like the fish
I must swim in you
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This brilliant poem goes to MyPoemsList. A 10 full score
Most beautiful metaphored poem aboit our emotions. Please dear poetess keepcreating such adorning poems about " the sea" . You are such a master in describing that in brevity. The picture reminds me of the many many Hokusai's pen-drawings. Excellent choice, dear poetess.
A brilliant poem on love based on metaphor is well executed. I appreciate the way of your presentation. Full vote.
Aaahhhhh after ages girl one more heart warming poem from your pen. Keep swimming until you surpass the storm.10++
Wow....I wonder how every other lover thinks the same way, What if, someone consider them as waves upon waves (this is my loud thinking) Your poem is awesome....loved it but keep swimming against all waves and keep writing such heartwarming poems.10++++
Fantastic, I appreciate the great depth in your poetic expression. Top score.