Monday, December 7, 2020

A Sea Of Solitude! Comments

Rating: 5.0

A Straight line to nowhere,
Solitude guides you there
Silence accompanies the traveler
Hoping, to arrive somewhere.
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Sandra Feldman
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Yiyan Han 09 December 2020

The year 2020 is tough for every one I think, and by praying to God then we'll see hope. Nice piece with flying stars

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 December 2020

A well crafted poem.... Truly heartfelt.....5 stars *****

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 December 2020

Straight-line is nowhere Everywhere is mixed up the good and bad to survive just Pure good soul feels always solitude wherever it travels........

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 December 2020

Lovely poem. I can feel the loneliness. I thought the tear drop was going to fall in the sea water. What a lonely tear drop in the sea in a lonely poem.

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