Gradually rocking, drifting, swaying
Your whole life viewed, through a sliver
Soft ocean waves gently tucking in
Cherished is, this final glimmer
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The narrator's sea of vivid images and adjective sounds made me feel as if I were falling asleep in a crystal spa.Another great piece of work, Marcus.
Enchanting poem! What a beautiful image you paint of a child falling asleep.