Wednesday, September 1, 2010

A Sea Of Dreams (A Bedtime Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gradually rocking, drifting, swaying
Your whole life viewed, through a sliver
Soft ocean waves gently tucking in
Cherished is, this final glimmer
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Marcus McKinley
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Beach Girl 28 August 2013

Enchanting poem! What a beautiful image you paint of a child falling asleep.

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Meena Mustafa 27 August 2013

Such a lovely poem :) thanks for sharing.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 08 September 2012

The narrator's sea of vivid images and adjective sounds made me feel as if I were falling asleep in a crystal spa.Another great piece of work, Marcus.

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Kasia Fedyk 03 July 2012

Very beautiful and magical! I love it

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SAN Di 10 January 2012

nice one; 'May your hopes and dreams run wild'

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