Sunday, March 26, 2006

A Screaming Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

A screaming silence envelops the land,
Ghostly armies are marching.
Not even the sound of a muffled drum
To mark the soldiers passing.
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Brian Joseph Dickenson
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Cecilie Bækkedal 26 March 2006

I love the light rhythm. This is a good war poem and it's very pointy! Thank you for a delightful read!

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Graham Jones 26 March 2006

An excellent write, I have written a few in the same vein your rhythm and flow go well with the content producing good images to the reader.

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Duncan Wyllie 26 March 2006

You have something really great here.I love the line 'The silence is only in the head Only the eyes can hear. Amazing, so profound.You have certainly earned a 10 here.Love Duncan

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Brian Joseph Dickenson

Brian Joseph Dickenson

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