A School On Holidays Comments

you really write well..the picture of a school without students was brought to mind

hey, gr8 write....reminds me of ma school days....nice power of observation...but u know many school on running days re in such condition....funny to say! ! ! >>...haha...cool write...keep going...all the best....bye. pls read nd comment on ma poems wen u find time..tc.

beautiful lines.......10.....