Wednesday, September 9, 2020

A Scene, With Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Afeeder sways
gently in a breeze,
fresh rainwater fills it.
Beside it, a rusty pole is
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Daniel Brick
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Soran M. H 28 September 2020

I could readily join them, slipping into flight with ease and coasting

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Glen Kappy 14 September 2020

Daniel, of your new ones I chose to read this first because I just posted a poem about a bird. I like the simplicity of this and relate to your wanting to join the birds in flight. I'm puzzled by a feeder filled with rain water. Maybe my knowledge of feeders is too limited. -Glen

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M Asim Nehal 09 September 2020

Nature delights in its all ways. The birds that are flying overhead are tardy and enjoying their long flight, I can see a V formation in your oem like those disciplined migratory birds forms. Your poem came live in front of my eyes, birds descending and with a splash they few back Awesome imageries...100+++ Hope all is fine with you my friend. Stay safe.

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