In a still wind, a twig moves up and down
Forcing me to see the lady with a crown
Dancing without wind in clothes of green
Smiling with the petals pink, a most happy scene
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I love this one, beautiful pictures in a garden. A bee pollinating the flowers. By the way I have a little be pointer on my screen! Real poetry in motion. Well crafted verses. Thanks.
very nicely painted the imagery! ! .. well crafted...
Sounds like magical moments of amazing beauty. Excellently written.
ahh...what a view..you gave me the beautiful feeling of the remarkable garden indoor how incredible way you have with your words i am in awe.....
I know why you can dancing without wind because the beautiful scene is so amazing, i bear it here now! _Soul
a perfect scene from a garden! very beautiful with a wink!
though its a imaginative poem, but Jahan Zaib always sketches his imagery in such a way that it sounds to be natural & real one...beautiful composition, beautiful diction, beautiful scene is created..wow, am compelled to say wow! amazing