A Scenario Of Lull, Before The Storm Comments

'under the scenic beauties feet, so many rivers originate, in hunger they look up to the sky'... truthful observation...expressed very poetic...i am able to see the real poet the real nature lover in you in this write...10

a wonderful poem ma'am... 'the many colours of rainbow, is the truth of illusion, and beauty of truth.' this is an awesome stanza. i just loved it. deep...and absolutely amazing. thank you very much.

mam, this poem has a great flow....very unique annd creative...10

Ritty, you convinced me through your poem of the lull before the storm! But, what kind of storm do you expect?

I loved this poem, the words you have chosen to describe a changing world are beautiful. Bob

the many colours of rainbow, is the truth of illusion, and beauty of truth. wow ritty ji thats awesome infact the poem is so fluid that you just rush through the first time...take a breeath and start all over again...beautiful and charming as the scenes u paint...and this qouted triplet is just awesome cheers