A Scared Fairy Comments

my favorite lines, so far: Upon my plaintive query At once her face got scary. and these: And her wild wide scary eyes, Made my dreams full of cries. ...............nice wide/wide! eyes/cries also are appreciated. hey john, i just noticed an old comment, below, by me. and i see you did make changes since last time! AND i see that i still liked 'those' lines i mentioned almost one year ago.. thanks, again, for sharing. :) bri

A great imaginative write......... A lovely tale of love, beauty, innocence and barbarism................ Though poem doesn't embody hope, yet it flows beautifully........... Some beautiful lines in there/....

. Far way form vanity...far way (faraway?) FROM? vanity...am i correct, G.j.? 'Since had conscious...i don't understand why the apostrophe is in front of 'Since.........and do you mean consciousness (since birth) ? of course conscious makes the rhyme; maybe that is why you used it. ok....now i see the other apostrophes.....i think they are called apostrophes. so now i think you are paraphrasing the Fairy Queen's answer to you. ok. but i REALLY don't believe you want bliss here: ..... 'Neither joy nor certitude I had Always bliss with fortune bad.' as bliss means, according to the computer, : .... bliss /blis/ Noun Perfect happiness; great joy. Something providing such happiness. i especially enjoyed reading the following; .....i mean the poet created some artistic lines to describe a grim situation. What ail thee O! Fairy Queen? Such woes and sorrow I had never seen, Upon my plaintive query At once her face got scary. AND i especially enjoyed the following lines: .... Alone and distant as polar star Helpless was I to wage a war, Her wild wide scary eyes Made my dreams full of cries. a fine poem. thanks for sharing. bri

this poem is amazing :)

A sad and and weary way to live even for a fairy..the poem a ten for sure sir.

this poem is fantastic! ! :) :)

Nice poetic work. Thanks for sharing

It's good to create fantasies and fairy-tales in this topsy-turvy world and all chaotic disorders, a temporary though a complete escape...

Beautiful word...nice poem...i enjoyed so much.

Well done Gulsher, you have scared the fairy even more.: D Remarkable poem created thank you for inviting me to read.

Perfect content for the title you named, you flow the words in a wave of story in such amazing parallel emotion..i can feel the fears! _Soul

Some beautiful imagery in here, a very inspired write.

the emotion in this beauty is just so incredible. especially for me because what is decribed here i can very much relate to. very well done ^_^ xXx zarina

I have never heard of a fairy being described as such. I like that you explore different points of view. I give it a rating of 10.

nice words collected in excellent way.

Here I am to complete it LOL Superbbbbb Gulsher. You really have amazing ability to create poems that feel like the tiny raindrops of the rain in summer, keeps fresh and alive. The rhythm is amazing and the flow is like the flow of the cold fresh stream down the mountain peaks of Kalam Fabulous. The similes and metaphors are of high literary standards. Touching Alone and distant as polar star

great words and brilliant ideas. i enjoy this fragrant work. well done

Ah a fantastic poem but d poignant effect makes one sad. Sir pls do read my poems too.

A beautiful poignant tale, with great lines!

wonderful composition...