Thursday, May 18, 2006

A Scar With No Name... Comments

Rating: 4.7

A scar with no name,
a selft inflected stain
in my heart as I breah in
I inhale pain...
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Robert Araya
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Dustin Bennefield 22 May 2006

Im baffled I loved the endng and had a good time reading it. Very good way of communication. Rhyme and all you held through to the end. Inkweaver

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Myra Jefferson 18 May 2006

Good imagery, I feel the emotions. This is what poetry is to me. Kudos!

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