A Scar On The Moon Comments

You seem to be an ecocentric poet here.You fight against human degradation of nature, which in turn has gory effects on mankind.You've joined such poet like Niyi Osundare in his collection, 'The Eye of the Earth'.I guess your use of excess rhymes does not in any way deprive you of conveying your message vividly.Kudos, dear!

The moon is usually portrayed by poets with the impression that suggests she is some lady or a goddess, and also she is seen as one who brings fortune or misfortune on earth. Here the voice pleas to the moon to forgive man for inflicting environmental hazards on earth.