Thursday, March 13, 2008

A Scandalous Inclination Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is a maze of adversities
Myriad tribulations filling its route
As though it is a bloody killing field
Where hardy hearts fought the battle
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Alison Cassidy 25 March 2008

An interesting 'morality' piece voiced with conviction and a good feel for language. I wonder though, is it the wealth, or is it the greed for more, and the fear of loss that does the harm? I don't mind how much money people have. It's what they do with it that matters to me. This poem certainly got me thinking. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Jurietta Duraan 20 March 2008

Marvin, you have wonderful insight in your fellow man.... very good poem. I look forward to reading more.

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Marvin Brato Sr

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