Friday, June 23, 2006

A Savior Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun sets and darkness envelopes the world
In the wrath of its deadly sin.
Only the stars shine bright in the vast universe
But yet this blackness sucks me into a world
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Chantelle Clark
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BEAU GOLDEN 13 July 2006

another pretty piece chantelle!

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Ruby Root 09 July 2006

Hi Chantelle, This is a very moving poem. Excellently written with good imagery compassion and emotion. This was really a nice poem I loved it. Take care.

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Melissa Broomhead 30 June 2006

i love this poem its great because music iz my saviour to lol -broomhead-

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win_it143 (*_*) 23 June 2006

wow fantastic gurl..i love it..good job...much love =-winneth-=143

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Chantelle Clark

Chantelle Clark

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