A Saturday Dawn Comments
The dawn that is suffocated in dust of the roads
and in the smokes of vehicles,
is slowly descending in the nearby park.
She is fresh
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Splendid expression is made here in this poem after deep observation. Moon will definitely smile with stars. An amazing poem is very beautifully penned...10
A dazzling piece of work! The last line is very powerful.....thanks dear sir for sharing!
Your eyes see what others couldn't, your pen writes what others can only hope to imagine.The beauty you see can only be seen by the rest of us through your exciting poem. Thank you sir
A very imaginative write from a vibrant poet who can admire beauty in all its shades!
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8/3/2025 12:31:06 AM # 1.0.0
Every one writes on nature in their own way....but none can beat Akhtarji....you have a special approach to nature...you are young and your poetry is ever youthful....thank you friend