Thursday, October 13, 2011

A Sand Castle And Our Magic Bond Comments

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Was the sunset and almost coming night,
Me and you sitting at the sea side and the seagulls are flying around,
Horizon in red highlights is hiding sun behind,
Sea seems so romantic in the moonlight dance.
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Cristina Teodor
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Unwritten Soul 14 October 2011

Wooow this is like my own childhood story, like you know it...i like the moon on sea surface...and yeah that sand castle was owned by me...but NOoooo the waves act like tsunami and it destroyed hahahahaha...i like this poem very much and first two stanza sounds so real to me but the rest are awesome..like it so much...is this inspired when you go travel more often? ? ? Keep it up, write more :) _Unwritten SOul

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