Wednesday, February 11, 2009

A Sanctuary Sight. Comments

Rating: 4.8

I could take you, reader, to a quiet place
Where sea meets sand, in secret beachy cove,
And, sleeping there, a-sprawl in open spaces
Lie a hundred seals or more in silent drove.
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Fay Slimm
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Susan Williams 23 April 2019

Your word palette is well stocked and Rembrandt would have enjoyed it! 10++++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 23 April 2019

I totally agree with Diana below! ! !

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Diana Van Den Berg 20 July 2009

I am not happy to be replying to this poem because I want to be still in it, standing there on the clifftop, forgetting to breathe as I gaze, enraptured, at these darling beautiful, innocent creatures, my heart fit to burst with joy. I had an experience like that with dolphins - and another with a baby zebra and his mama. Both times, I thought I was going to die of ecstasy.

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Myrtle Thomas 05 April 2009

Fay this sounds so lovely I wish I could see it with my eyes, but I saw it through yours.Very good imagery. a 10

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James Roberts 16 February 2009

A very beatiful poem reminds me of the Farne Islands Really top rate 10++ loal jxx

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C. P. Sharma 14 February 2009

An enchanting view of the sanctuary of seals. Pleasure to read it. CP

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beautiful imagery. I like how you got the reader involved by calling out to him, grabbing and securing his attention.

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Catrina Heart 11 February 2009

A beautiful sanctuary, printed with nice imagery...Thanks...10+++

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Lynda Robson 11 February 2009

We have seals near here Fay and they are a joy to behold, you have captured the wonderful feeling that comes with watching them, well done, 10 Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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