Marching on to battle in the land and home of the free
Far away from family and the love ones they long to see
Yearning to be with the ones at a place they love at best
Braving the harsh weather just to pass freedoms test
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Many had lost their lives and others stayed on their post.. lovely lne...10 We see the tremendous change The narrows appears on stage The country is forgotten The region is placed before even Let countrymen decide Why our blood should be way laid? Why not you take decisive steps? That shall grant keeps us on top!
A true picture of the horrors of war we owe them for our freedom great write well done
Thank you Patricia for asking me to come to this space. I loved this tribute. Keep writing.
that last line really completed the poem so well. It's an unforgettable experience.
we are the soldiers who fought for liberty, and we'll continue this fight to keep our country free.
Just to pass freedom's test They sacrifice a lot. Hats off to them. Nice poem for a nice cause.
A creditable tribute to our Soldiers whom I also have a great respect for their sacrificial service! !
As a air force vet of w.w.2 I greatly appreciate this salute to all veterans. I believe they are needful of more respect and you have shown this in a very caring way. I have one-Before The Next Bomb Falls- Please give it a look
A great tribute to our soldiers! ! I invite you to read my poem on the same subject 'A Hymn to the Unsung Heroes'! !
Very striking line- - -Many had given their lives and others stayed on their post
A wonderful tribute indeed Patricia - we should never forget our brave soldiers.
A very fine patriotic song with rhyme and rhyme which also deserves a salute from readers..
Oh how we ever so thankful for the soldiers at war and so many have given their life to fight the despots of this world...I remember the bombs coming down in our UK town in 1944 as a kid from the biggest despot of all..Adolph..thanks and regards