Friday, October 17, 2008

A Salute Comments

Rating: 5.0

I fight with you I get angry
you seem upset - dint
bother me much
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Srikanth Parthasarathy 22 October 2008

'I know they say - its the size of a fist Then where do you find so much love in it? ' A most original thought and wonderful too.

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Barbara Terry 18 October 2008

This is a very captivating, and strong worded salute to your mother, and after going out into the world, finally understood that the housework and everything else has to be done in addition to the job you hold. We all learn this lesson when we leave home. Thank you so much for sharing. I give you a solid 10 for this. Hugs, Barbara

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Kesav Easwaran 17 October 2008

a grown up...a poet too...still a baby loving, to her mother in mind...a pleasing read...words honest soaked in love...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 October 2008

'If ever you need A shoulder to rest-I promise to give my utmost best' oh! captivating! ............10+

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