He had death rolling in his eyes
He was either witness
Or had ordered
Death
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enigmatic volume of thought...intrigue that puzzle every game.....for life lives in complexity of parts.....all seem saleable. yet! there is one that value nothing less but....eternity brings.....your poem push me to the limit to know more of myself, than a soul with immortality live..... thank you my friend....you have a very sensitive poem of all....i love to read with passion on every line.....God bless you and good luck... a 10 +++++
a saleable commodity................well crafted words and truth is sometime give pain.........a good poem indeed reveal the truth.............
Beautiful Sadiqullah, your words reveal much more than you are ready to disclose! 10 for your honest and brave write.
They are both A saleable commodity By the merchants of death fine lines. shan