Sunday, February 22, 2009

A Sale Of Two Titties Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the heart of an old village setting
There stands an Antique dealers rooms
Full of rarest antiques brought for vetting
Plus two urns sold by Hilda May Coombs
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stephen stirk
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Lovely. Hilarious. Enjoyed the hum

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Rosalita Fernandez 19 March 2010

i chuckled throughout i like this!

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Jenny Sherman 08 January 2010

I had to laugh all the way while reading this, a great little story you created this is most defiently the best poem i have read yet

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Jenny Sherman 08 January 2010

I had o laugh all the way while reading this, a great little story you created this is most defiently the best poem i have read yet

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David Harris 23 October 2009

Stephen, brilliant as always, I suspect everyone else has written something witty, My only contribution can be I went to an auction once and bought a bedpan for half a crown. Hell Knows why I bought it I wasn't geriatric then. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. All the best David

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Robert E Hann 01 October 2009

Take the fine comments below this and roll them in one giant ball. Now wasn't that fun? And now that you're done, I guess they about said it all.

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Robert Jaffray 14 September 2009

a brilliant and funny poem with a laugh in every line.............a masterpiece of poetry and comedy

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Lord Labak Das 13 August 2009

The Lord Likes it...................best

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Saadat Tahir 08 June 2009

hi there LOL real great funny stuff...well done a bit ironic too cheers

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Michael Gale 28 May 2009

Ha! Ha! Great poem that had me rolling. I am glad I got to read it before poemhunter removes it from it's sight. They, here have a penchant for removing poems that they deem dirty, in content as well as words. Don't get me wrong, I loved it! Hope you have it saved or copies some where safe. This one was a master piece, no doubt. I easily gave it a tenner! God bless all poets-MJG.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 May 2009

simply wonderful poem parody, yet a marvel in its own style, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 May 2009

hey great story stirk..lol...wondered wether i was watchng 'who is your daddy ' (a movie) ...all da time..great fun...auction..i 10++++for making me laugh o l

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Angela L Burke 30 April 2009

LOL I loved it... I love poetry that tells stories especially if they are funny!

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Myrtle Thomas 07 April 2009

I found this so very entertaining and laughed all the way through, You have a very vivid imagination, Bawdy and rowdy and oh so funny.A great write

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Carl Harris 26 March 2009

Well, this is a hilarious tale, Stephen, not only well written, but utilizing a great play on words at almost every turn! You have a vivid imagination and a great humorous story telling ability and it simply shines in this wildly humorous poem. Carl.

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Alison Cassidy 11 March 2009

This is ludicrously funny Stephen. What a fine story-teller you are with an impeccable ear for traditional poetic form. Indeed, you exhibit some of the wit and ingenuity of C J Dennis' 'The Sentimental Bloke'. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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T McH 08 March 2009

Nothing short of hilariously brilliant. What a find! t x

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Mark R Slaughter 06 March 2009

Steve - hilarious as ever - how do you think of these themes? Please tell me there really was an auction like this..... Mark

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George Bernard-bloody-shaw 27 February 2009

What the Dickens? ? ? ? A bit long but worth hanging about for.. In fact, excellent bit of word manipulation. I enjoy your twit ('scuse spelling) . George

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Kathleen West 24 February 2009

Loved this humorous tale....you are quite a story teller. Kathleen

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