Wednesday, February 27, 2008

A Sailor's Captive Comments

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I am here. Trapped on the shore for eternity
I strain to hear the sea…restrained it was and denied to me
Sailor O sailor I ache for the music of the waves outside your sea
Ever since the day I left your sail and stayed here
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sally sh.
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 May 2008

some of the changes you've made has added more glittering tune to the sea song.

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Sorry for a second comment, but it saw this poem basking under glory of a new sun from some far away galaxy Wanderers are we, seeking the land that embraces the sea Till our sails dock... tune to the song I shed for thee Sing me the lyrical symphony of the sea hugs-rehan

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 March 2008

this is a tsunami of lives....orchestrated by the oceans..........

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You let me stay in peace with one within me Awesome Selma hugs-rehan

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