A Sailor Return To An Ocean Comments

a beautiful dedication

True, we all shipout one day.

Touching, very sad but lovely and enjoyable to read

It is a wonderful metaphorical poem dedicated to a very loved person, who died. I understand that his memory will always remain alive and the tear will make the pain to be bearable........Thank you for sharing..........10++++++

nicely written, a deep & great tribute to a brave sailor, his memory would live forever in your heart for the good things he did. My sympathy...

This poem narrates the life and death of a sailor-a bit sad but his memories forever remain in hearts..

This poem narrates the life and death of a sailor-a bit sad but his memories forever remain in hearts..

nice piece sir......

Good write very sweet..........

Even though the poem conveys the feelings for the lost sailor, it could have been made more reflective. Somewhere I miss the depth. I can't say where.

nice poem as always.......

This is wonderful, remembering a kind hearted person, whom you and others will never see again.

very nice and touchy poem.we can never forget a kind person even after they leave this world.thanks for sharing.

the last line wonderfully crowned this beautifully written poem.....10

What a great metaphorical way of describing our passage to the next world and for expressing the brevity of life here on earth.

very sad n heartouching 10+ fanastic job kept it up

All sailors have there port calls - so with GOD

The life of a sailor is too risky. Everytime he comes back to the shore, it is a rebirth for him. This poem is dedicated tothe sailor who returned to the ocean.

This is such a sensitive and poignant theme yet carefully played the words...We are all sailors of this world and soon will return to the vast ocean of infinity...shall rest in peace in our calling! Great poem.......Thanks1

the poem is just right in length and it is good