A Sailor Return To An Ocean Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Sailor Return To An Ocean

Rating: 4.9


A sailor return to an ocean
And always live in our memories
It was a true pleasure
To have known you
Words cannot adequately express
Your dedication and devotion to us
Your kind hearted
Generous spirit
Vibrant sense of humour
Will live forever
Your time will have a lasting impression
Deep witihin all the now broken heart
Of those you touched
You will never escape our heart
It is hard to believe
You are no longer with us
You endured so much for so long
And hugged many hearts
You were such an inspiration
And a gift in our life
We will absolutely miss you
You will rise up like an eagle
Soaring by the power of love
No more suffering and pain
You are now sleeping peacefully
In the arms of smiling angels
You are singing in heaven
May perpetual light shine upon you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 16 September 2009

This poem narrates the life and death of a sailor-a bit sad but his memories forever remain in hearts..

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 16 September 2009

This poem narrates the life and death of a sailor-a bit sad but his memories forever remain in hearts..

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nice piece sir......

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Eyan Desir 15 September 2009

Good write very sweet..........

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Ravi A 15 September 2009

Even though the poem conveys the feelings for the lost sailor, it could have been made more reflective. Somewhere I miss the depth. I can't say where.

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Louis Rams 26 September 2009

a beautiful dedication

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Joseph Poewhit 23 September 2009

True, we all shipout one day.

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Kuji Soliman 21 September 2009

Touching, very sad but lovely and enjoyable to read

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Marieta Maglas 21 September 2009

It is a wonderful metaphorical poem dedicated to a very loved person, who died. I understand that his memory will always remain alive and the tear will make the pain to be bearable........Thank you for sharing..........10++++++

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Noel Horlanda 18 September 2009

nicely written, a deep & great tribute to a brave sailor, his memory would live forever in your heart for the good things he did. My sympathy...

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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