A Sailing Ship Comments

But we are together the point lies in the unity and nice poem.

'But we are together.' 'Until we are united.... Until we are side by side....' Beautiful lesson: together we stand, but if divided, we will surely fall.

'But we are together.' 'Until we are united.... Until we are side by side....' Beautiful lesson: together we stand, but if divided, we will surely fall.

A great poem with a message of courage and hope. Yes, the winds may rush, waves may gush, but the voyage of life must go on with courage and determination. I loved your sense of positive thinking very much. Kudos. GBY.

I liked it very much...i v written a similar poem too...'Black Pear's everlasting love for the Outrageous Poseidon'..it's about how I was in my mom' s ship...how she carried me through difficulties...very true indeed..but sometimes i feel if i take charge of the ship ship will drown...you v taken charge..so that's great...nice one 10+++

The anchors are gone. Our way is lost. Ocean is against us. But we are together. hi kranthi...very nice inspirational lines reminds me of Homer and Uleysis great its a tenner cheers

Even life is adventurous...sail the ship...great write10