A Safer Place Comments

You build the pictures amazingly.... I am right there in the kitchen.... you capture the everyday painful stuff of everyday life so wonderfully. The internal (alarm?) bells resound so much there's an orchestra going on! As so often on reading your works, I think, thank you Mr CCW.

This is a very original prose-poem. I like it very much, although I prefer tigher verse. This is pretty verbose, but that's only a minor complaint. Overall, the poem is fresh and unusual and has a nice pay-out at the end.