* A Safe Place On Earth! Comments

such a cool peom to read.

The saga of the brilliant fly! Thanks much.

What an absolutely enchanting image! Methinks you have quite an affinity for horses - and flies too! ! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

great poem you have going here!

An educational ride on the horse with you in this piece Deva - and very well put together - - a clever way of dealing with the title 'A Safe Place on Earth' - - love the humour too.....10 Fay

I appreciate writers who are able to paint a picture with their words.A fundamental art of the poet, you may say, but it amazes me how many would-be poets seem to lack this basic requirement. I am glad to say that you excel at the art. Another well-presented short story!

I could feel the breeze with this one Deva, amazing visual piece with a clear message my friend...loving the flow dear