A Safe Haven Comments

Sweet love story, loved the rythm, the provocative images and the vivid discriptions, well done

the night begins to fall I hear a sweet luscious call Is my fragile heart to blame For melting with her call of my name Very touchy and fluffy feathers of a featherstone fathom called life again depicted in another manner.....feelings portrayed........thanks for sharing this piece.

Your my love, my life, my other half and my identity I promise you my love our love will stay for eternity wowwwwwwwwww an eternal promise -10 anjali (do read mine THAT GLITTERING SWORD)

Well, this writing is full of pure love. That is what comes through. A safe haven is a wonderful title and no better safe haven than the arms of a lover. GW62

WOW! this is so beautiful it made me cry! this words will stay in my heart for ever! thanks for sharing!