Thursday, May 26, 2005

A Safe Distance From My Destruction Comments

Rating: 4.9

let me be nothing to you,
not a bell with a voice
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Amberlee Carter
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Xxx Xxx 26 May 2008

I think this earth is less than the planet you come from

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Howard Johnson 28 February 2008

Decided I needed A little dose of Amberlee today, , , and randomly picked out this one, Ohh MAn this one cuts and how deep, Ouch. Still looking for a band aid, , , each stanza echos with a retorical question that is bluntly asked, , , , , I haven't read some as stong as this Since the lable on a'' Ajax bottle'..., All this aside, A very creative and most excellent piece, Amberlee

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G. Murdock 07 December 2005

Beautiful, haunting, succint, great sweeps of truth and revelation.

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your work is so good, i want to scream at the top of my lungs, mad with envy. ....amazing. Jake

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Uriah Hamilton 27 May 2005

You sing alone, but it is such an enchanting song.

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Raynette Eitel 26 May 2005

This is wonderful...great imagery and strong statements. The last line is the best. Raynette

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