A Sad Tale Comments

very very traumatic....painful.....had a brush with lucifer there what can one say....except cringe in the horror of the moment.. kudos...maggi one for the courage to go ahaead and say it doubly for putting it so well in a great poem iv been at poetry 2.5 decades and...never....ever been touched in so horrible a manner... you write very well and have an obvious gift of words if not worlds cheers and ten

First line? Leap on the floor? Or heap on the floor? Leaping is jumping, and heap is a pile or a mass. I am not trying to edit your work, but if it is not what you meant, then I hope you don't mind me pointing it out? :) Deborah Cromer