Sunday, July 19, 2009

A Sad Story Comments

Rating: 4.3

Can’t count on anyone this time
Trading faith for piece of mind
Seems your always needing time to heal
Scared of moments when you begin to feel
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Kelly Batson
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Lynn Glover 25 May 2010

A beautiful poem written with lots of emotions and plenty of rhyming, which I really love. A good Write. Keep up the good work. Lynn

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Sam Edison 19 July 2009

It can be very hard to trust in others after certain life experiences but we deffinitely cannot live our lives not trusting anyone or we end up forever lonely. Good write 10/10

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Kelly Batson

Kelly Batson

Cincinnati Ohio
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