I look upon my Nanna's shallow form,
Her sunken eyes show an unending storm.
Tubes stuck in her arms, neck and belly,
She strains her eyes to watch the telly.
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Hope your Nanna will recover very soon. A very touching poem. A good write. Smile.
It's a beautiful smile, it was like a trapped bird wanna be free and fly, fly to say to you don't don't be worry about me, Allah with me :) If God's willing she's gonna be okay soon to keep up the promise to make you smile :)
Beautiful poem, Lenore. Your nanny must be proud of you. I hope she will recover to enough of health to be able to read or hear more of your poems. She and your family are in my prayers. Lots of strength for all of you
Nice flow - very descriptive