Wednesday, March 3, 2010

A Sad Sad Story Comments

Rating: 4.0

The river flowed through meadows green
I saw the wild rose, pink and serene.
There came a voice from beyond the blue,
An angel from heaven said - it was you.
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Joyce Hemsley
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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 29 October 2018

THIS IS A NICE POEM. IT IS ABOUT A SAD MOMENT. THANK YOU.

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Anonymous Poet 27 April 2018

So deep and beautiful.

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jennifer 04 March 2018

what is the sensory imagery, figurative language, key ideas tone purpose of author

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Captain Herbert Poetry 17 July 2015

Wonderful flow and waves of the lines through words

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David Munene wa Kimberly 03 March 2010

The phrasing of the words is super, but it steals and stills the meaning of the sadness...

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Joyce Hemsley

Joyce Hemsley

Portsmouth England
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