Thursday, July 26, 2007

A Sad Poem Comments

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O the wind danced across my face
Standing tall in the sun
Majestic beauty, golden lace
In the wheat fields, life had begun
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Milica Franchi De Luri 30 July 2009

When i saw the title of this poem i thought it would be about human tragedy or heartbreak, but it turned out to be about the roting sandwich, forgotten in the fridge.I think in a way it is sad, considering there is so many hungry people around the world, and it wouldn't happen in some poor countries, but in America waste of food is happening on a large scale and not many people give it a second tought. About the poem it self it is well written, technically it has all like you point out at the end. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you........Milica

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