A Sad One Sided Story(He Needs To Read) Comments

A heart-felt piece that leaves the reader with a sigh, lots of emotion behind this one Thankyou, Love Duncan X

Never fall in love with a poet Guarded Heart, again anyway. they are just as messed up as you and only maturity will save either of you imo. I am 47 and I still haven't grown up. A couple of typos 'too' instead of to. I think you could edit this down a little to make it flow, but actually it is just a conversation and probably nothing of interest to the reader. We poets do this, when we have no choice. Best to remove them, if you can't make it universal. Keep writing, Tai