Saturday, July 1, 2006

A Sad Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

What a sad life I lead, stuck here on the wall
with two screws in my guts so that I don't fall.
I am only here to hang a basket, one that is full
of flowers; then to be sprayed with water every
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COMMENTS
Nalini Hebbar 14 July 2006

you do find a poem in the strangest of places...you found one on a peg! ! ! ! ...lovely...but YOU should go on and on even if you hit some people on the nose every now and then...well hit me with a poem anyday! ! ...love...nalini

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Ernestine Northover 01 July 2006

This is sad and hilarious at the same time. Wonderful description of a wall backet, giving it a life is great. A thoroughly delightful read, and a brilliant write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 01 July 2006

I agree with Sandra, to personalize somthing in this way and then to add feeling that the reader can interpret, wow! what a gift Love Duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 01 July 2006

Dear Sylvia, you have such a unique way of bringing inanimate things to life. Praise for your rich imagination., Love, Sandra

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Francesca Johnson 01 July 2006

Another little masterpiece, Sylvia. I do so appreciate your poems, they are refreshingly different and really funny. Two screws in his guts - how painful, and ready for the scrappy, too. You've got me feeling sorry for the poor thing, ha ha ha. Keep them coming.... Love, Fran xx

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Suchoon Mo 01 July 2006

The last two lines. They can surely kick. A good poem. Best Regard S.

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