people are drifting away like leaves in the fall
unjust that this summer should be so tear filled
the season of blazing heat is meant to be filled with joy
with passion and carefree living
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see, big heart.. fill it iwth much love ok... give it too, to the undeserving and deserving
A good poem indeed.........but me thinks, meeting and separation is a way of life.............
will i see a bright sunny afternoon those who leave tell me to be happy it is sad but happiness too. whopose who left may be feeling diffrent.. good poem indeed read mine... come home... home bound and no weparate ways and butterflies around
From start to finish, this beautiful imagery laced piece dances around the page delivering sweetness in the heart of the reader....very well composed piece that shows the raw talent you have within.....excellent piece 10+++
'people are drifting away like leaves in the fall' great opening lines.... a very good write. i cant wait to read more
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful work of art.