At her prime
the busty Goody
bid bye
to life around
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God loves those/ who die young....; very impressive and expressive lines!
nicely penned..nice to read...too young to die means less guilts and sins..naizz
God loves those Who die young, though. sometimes dying is better than walking dead.... not a word to express the feel brought by your poem! ! ! ! ! marvelous....... mind blowing....... words of heaven!
the urge to live is burning hot yet the flames blown out sadness pictured well for a death immature.... all ur poems are lovely laltha.