A Sad Fact Comments

Great write, Dave. a wonderful put together of words that depict our reality.

It is so sad...but, true. Great poem Dave!

Yes, we can make the world better one person at a time, only after we have saved and made ourselves better. Very good poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Written very well. With no self worth, gives no desire to muddle through times of despair, No sense of pride leaves little to hold a candle to, As a disease hopelessness will spread, the weak will fall through, the strong we survive. written by Nicholle Gibson. Isn't just a total lost when you see people out there that really make it seem like we are waiting for nothing? I like it

We are in a better place with thoughts like this poem...that is what poetry is for...a voice to make the world a better place..its true...regards

Agreed. Unfortunately, it is so true.

So true. Truth garbed in such simple words. It's worth a try though. So uplifting. Let's have more like this.. Mohabeer Beeharry

we always look to the future with hope, without it there is no life. A good write Dave.

Beautiful thoughts.... Well written..

Its high time the people start acting and not just hoping. we are the world!

'only we can save ourselves'.... you nailed it!

It is indeed sad but true, it is all down to people to make the world a better place. Another good one from your pen Dave.

Waiting for nothing and only we can make the world a better place. Very very good. And true.

when we have high hope, we may be sad, but people take it easy, when something is not that important! I agree with you that we have to save ourselves! Nice to read!

This idea looked easy but after I read your poem. Very well written...... Simple and meaningful.

Yeah It is A Sad Fact, and yes Its True.........._Soul

heavy implications in this poem. sad but true i guess

Good write Dave, we can all hope but we need action as well.

Great writer, you know how to use word in a poem to become a nice poem

It's true no doubt but we should sustain hope.