A Sacred Meeting In The Universe Comments

Hey, read to that girl this and the last poem I commented on, and she's yours lol ~Lee

What is more sacred than desire? This is just so fine - truly admirable. I especially admired the 'breath' and the breadth of feeling. A very eloquent and evocative write.

Hope she phoned - how could she not after reading a joy like this? ! Hugs Anna xxx

Wonderful write, such a closeness for another.You have written this very well.Love Duncan

Brilliant! I thought the ending made it kind of funny, too. Well done.

Reminded me of the carefree days of student life. I still don't understand why that had to change.

very clever..loved it

I liked this one. I love the change in tone in the second stanza....The first stanza brought out a bunch of great images. Great writing!

well, hopefully she'll return your long distant phone call from the heart...a good read my friend.

Keep trying you'll get her...whether in this lifetime or the next you'll get her. Good poem!

persuaverance is always useful too. especially if one believes in reincarnation. the only trouble is, Uriah, is what happens if Nikki changes her phone number in the next lifetime? anyhow...another warm, unpretentious offering...and Nikki, if you're reading this, cut the guy a break! He cares enough to write poetry about you...that's a good start : -)