One envisions a swirl of mayhem
With an oceanic perpetuity splashing
Against the involuted classes marching
Stoically providential as in the masterpiece
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You envision and express perfectly a Russian spirit here, I am amazed by the flow and energy of all lines presented. Keep on writing! A.
Are you invisible here at poemhunter? But you are such a wonderful writer! Let's pull off your invisibility cloak from now on. 'Worth all the gems of a Faberge egg' what colorful language is here!
HI, Pasquale. A fine expression of Russian love of poetry. The last three lines are perfect and I like the opening swirl of mayhem.