A Rush To Find Comments

I rushed to see here there My eyes were in search of her and very eager She was not to be seen anywhere I thought very badly of her.. so much passion for her. it is evident....10

Hey friend what do you think, the moment you creat this poem? I.tink you like story and your write like a telling, i.like your openinon, simple, and cool.is that good of you,

I rushed to see here there My eyes were in search of her and very eager She was not to be seen anywhere.. sweet memeory all teh time////10